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balcony sessions by ~pixpop:iconpixpop:



Engrave the clouds on my right wrist,
Twist my arm and click my heart back into place,
Unwrap my smile and make me some coffee
Under a tree as I write poems about the sun
On white floorboards that crack.
Dry my eyes with scriptures and leave me stranded on some corner,
Washing the troubles off my life.


Draw me a parasol and take my picture on a pier,
Adjust the lighting in my eyes
And find a love note in your pocket...
©2006-2009 ~pixpop
:iconpixpop:

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the clouds are low and I'm feeling

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:iconpsobloke:
Your talent always astounds me =)

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One good reason.
- PsoBloke (John)
Check out Everything Sucks to find out why they rock so hard.
:iconpixpop:
:bow: thank you John, I'm touched by your praise :)

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sarcastically perfect :bow:
:iconinnuendo-media:
Once again beautiful. The thing i like most about your writing is that it conjures up really interesting and unique pictures in my mind. This is no exception. Great work :D

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... and a voice was screaming: Holy Jesus! What are these goddamn animals?

Please check out my prints: [link]
:iconpixpop:
Thank you Peter!! I'm glad, more than glad you enjoyed them. If the imagery works in your mind and not just in mine it's great :D

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sarcastically perfect :bow:
:iconpatrilususnaturae:
Oooh, a pretty poem came to mind to compliement you:
You have this quick-hitting dirty New York
street accent, you know that? If I colored your poems
they'd be grays and blacks, and splashed in red.

I don't know who you are but I felt the sting of that slap
from your last argument on the pavement.

S h o w m e w h o y o u a r e;
enlighten me, if you will.
And this time don't hold back when you swing.

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My new account: :iconiamphoenixmoth:
:iconpatrilususnaturae:
ugh.
compliment***
It's a little difficult typing on a laptop that's actually on your lap.

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My new account: :iconiamphoenixmoth:
:iconshonalou:
Beautiful. I love how the words draw a picture in my mind.
:+fav:

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When all of the stars have faded away,
try not to worry, you'll see them someday..
Oasis

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